All Comments on 'Reaching Out'

by RedHairedandFriendly

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
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Metaphorical crushing weight

Of pain upon pain added up.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
passion

you express passion very well in your writes, I enjoyed your poem.

oregon_galoregon_galabout 18 years ago
been there...

to the point and direct. well said.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
These are not deep emotions...

they are right on the surface... we can feel the texture of them; make them our feelings.

Thanks for sharing your heart with us!

DJ

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Love undeservedly bestowed

Why?

Because the mind is silenced by heart and eye.

Thank You. Ronnie W.

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