All Comments on 'Ready For Bed?'

by RhymeFairy

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
a big smile...

......because I've watched you blossom. I haven't been commenting as much as I should but I can't resist this. Welll done!

Tess

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
dreamy

like a ray of sunshine on a cloudy day I absorbed this poem. Nice write RF~ (~_~)

EmJ0385EmJ0385about 18 years ago
Now here's a piece a single girl can relate to!

There she is, a good girl still, dreaming of her man while she...sleeps.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
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Preparations for bed

With motions so sweet

All to dream dreams rated triple-X...

PatHous56PatHous56about 18 years ago
Sensuously sophisticated little verse

I truly enjoyed this little verse of yours. Familiar with that lonely bed of which you speak where nightly dreams (and more) take place while waiting for another's return. Patricia

OSoBuffOSoBuffabout 18 years ago
Very Nice!!!

So now, tell me, is this what you girls do when your man's not there to hold you and squeeze you and please you all night?

CaPic267CaPic267about 18 years ago
Even today, I remember those single days

I can still remember all my single days you evoke in this short piece. CP

pcsocakepcsocakeabout 18 years ago
beautiful!

this is one dream that i'd love to wrap in a ribbon and excitedly unwrapped later and turn it into a reality.

wonderful poem! thank you

MyNecroticSnailMyNecroticSnailabout 18 years ago
I like bed

enjoin your rite <winkz

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