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Those last six lines make reading the whole thing worthwhile. It's the strongest part and summarize all you've written; you might want to try tweaking it a bit and try to cut it down.

http://forum.literotica.com:81/showthread.php?p=22233429#post22233429

is very real. Unclouded by useless mechanisms. The lines

"If you haven't tried something, you can't rate it,

That’s why you're full of it when you say you hate it" struck me like a brick, or a sock full of rocks. Rock, ya dig? Only crit: this poem (in my opinion, of course) could have benefited from a few choice periods.