All Comments on 'Rebel'

Mmmmmmm. That phrase alone makes it worth the 5. ~Imp

Can't help but want to be her... sigh. ~Minx

And now I leave MY mark. I agree with Imp, a very good line, and I'm certain the intended recipient will love it!

Rebel's a lucky girl.

Direct and to the point, capturing the agressiveness of need and the desire to control her pleasure.

Passions let loose, the reins discarded. God, that was nice. Love it when love does this to someone.

mismused

The passion just oozes out of this poem. Beautifully done! Thank you, LJ

nice visual...great poem

~Honey

Such intense and uninhibited passion. Loved it!

Beautifully written! What a lucky woman! I am going to lick my fingers now!

Clear to see that you have passion for this Rebelchick and i can see why... Job well done, Blackie.

Very hot.

Do me next?

...and raw, like sex should be. And like all good sex it leaves it's mark/brand.

I got the impression this was rushed .A bit of polishing, mainly omitting unnecessary words would improve it.

Hot and sexy, but I'd expect nothing less. Full of raw passion. Loved it!

Wow! This is the most passionate, sensual poem I've ever read. I'm still catching my breath after reading it! I don't know who the lucky woman is, but you definitely wove a spell with your words. First rate!