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LazorritaLazorritaabout 3 years ago

a sweet ode to the Pussy! charmed!

Paul4playPaul4playabout 3 years agoAuthor

@lazorrita. Thank you for commenting. This poem is very special to me, and not many people have appreciated it. I understand it is not to everyone’s appetite.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I’ve wondered how men feel about this and love how you express it. When you are with a group of women in a social setting, can you tell which ones are menstruating? Do you think about this?

elainazemacovaelainazemacovaalmost 3 years ago

Menstruation is certainly not my cup of tea, but have read this piece several times. A bit squeamish about the subject matter, but reading it several times must mean your writing brings a flavor to my eyes. Well done my worshiper of womanhood.

Paul4playPaul4playalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Thank you, firstofmay and elaina!

Yes, I do wonder about the women in a social setting, and where they are in their cycle. But can I tell? PMS might be apparent, but menstruating? Hmmm…how would I know if I am correct or not? Ha!

However, if I see or meet a woman who has me imagining what it would be like to give her oral pleasure….I will also wonder what it would be like if she were on her period when I serve her with my tongue….

And yes, I do feel as though I am a “worshipper of womanhood”!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It's refreshing the way you embrace this aspect of womanhood instead of stigmatizing it! A well written poem celebrating womanhood.

yfnspyfnspover 2 years ago

Delicious! Good thing she doesn't want 'your clit stick' to bleed. That could be painful! 😧

MarthaMcKinleyMarthaMcKinleyabout 2 years ago

I really like your word choice and word play. I was never squeamish about menstrual blood, and in fact saw it as a delicacy, like steak tartar. And this poem has the same tone. Not sure I understand the ending though, b/c your act is heroic in ways, not to be belittled?

Paul4playPaul4playabout 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you, Martha M for your compliments. The ending is grounded in my submissive relationship to my Dominant Mistress.

HottieOlwenHottieOlwenalmost 2 years ago

'Only Women bleed' as Alice Cooper remarked. So it's a good job Pet is on hand to do clean up. Is Pet your alter ego, I wonder? Very erotic. Well done.

Paul4playPaul4playalmost 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you, HottieOlwen!

Indeed, “Only Women Bleed”! All us men who wear lace and satin in our futile efforts to be feminine, must submit to superior women.

I wrote this poem in honor of a prior online gentle Domme, for whom I performed menstrual worship. She adored having me as Her Pet, and it was my privilege to service her, especially when she had PMS, cramps, and heavy clots. She kept me and my clit stick at the ready for her needs!

DampKittenDampKitten3 months ago

It's going to be a rare breed of guy willing to do this, and I've never approached the option with anyone I've dated. The piece is beautifully written and alluring, regardless how squeamish may be your reader. Lots of guys are willing to have menstrual sex, but not so many are willing to dive in the red sea.

Paul4playPaul4play3 months agoAuthor

Damp Kitten: Your comments are right on target; that’s why I needed to write this poem. Oral sex during menses is the single most intimate and erotic act I ever experienced! Menstruation is the ultimate display of womanhood, and thus, I find “a dive in the Red Sea” to be the perfect way to honor a woman’s sexuality and femininity.

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