by FuckDoll
very interesting word combinations and images.
I look forward to more of your work
I can't decide if you start with too much and chop words to too little, or start with nothing and stick words together, but not enough.
It is interesting in any event, if not complete.
This sounds like one of those poems that's created by random words.
or scrabble champion? ... hehehey! loved the poem, very gripping and energetic for a laid back reader <grin > superb poetry (~_~)