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TathagataTathagataabout 19 years ago
some

very interesting word combinations and images.

I look forward to more of your work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Me too!

I can't decide if you start with too much and chop words to too little, or start with nothing and stick words together, but not enough.

It is interesting in any event, if not complete.

WickedEveWickedEveabout 19 years ago
Poetry Generator?

This sounds like one of those poems that's created by random words.

My Erotic TailMy Erotic Tailabout 19 years ago
witty word wizard

or scrabble champion? ... hehehey! loved the poem, very gripping and energetic for a laid back reader <grin > superb poetry (~_~)

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Interesting...

blend of images and word weaving.

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