by seannelson
composed of tercets but these aren't haiku; too many images, not internal comparison or association they do however hit on the ambiguity meter. Presented as a single unit, they make a pretty good poem though.
Taken together I like the clear images that create a picture of a time that is conveyed both physically and emotionally, and all with showing, not telling. Nice to read you again, and I wish you the best on your journey.