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All Comments on 'Remonstrance on Fire and Water'

by loserstyx

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darkerdreamerdarkerdreameralmost 17 years ago
some of the

punctuation is off-setting, but other than that it reads great. A huge improvement over the first version and a good write with some "poisonous" imagery. I should steal from you more often, apparently.

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