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All Comments on 'Riding Meteors'

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jthserrajthserraover 20 years ago
The first stanza

perked my interest, but then slid into several cliches that dulled the shine... warming like a blanket and the pale blue water... kind of made something special into something nice, but ordinary...

jim :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Ain't love grand?

It sure inspires some great poems. Here's one.

perksperksover 20 years ago
cheesy tripe

you win.

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