All Comments on 'Roll'

Loved the two-sidedness. Everyone 'punished, rewarded', having sweet and weak spots.

Thanks for sharing

...oh wow!....

...oh my.....

How the lusty tables do turn......

Please, please only use capitals at the beginning of each sentence (which you have done on some lines) instead of each line. Your clever enjambments will stand out for what they are, making the rest of the piece flow seamlessly. I would call this Poetic prose.

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