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by Nakedcraving

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AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Dear NC - nope, no, nunca, nada, this is a good theme but it needs some humanity. You may have pulled it off watching the Mrs. get fubbed, but as a poem, respectfully, you just flubbed. I love ya and sometimes you hit it out of the park, but for this poem the theatre went dark.

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Taught School for 45 years. Wrote books on nudism and body acceptance. Have biked the coast of California. Live naked as often as possible. Write as hobby. I am a baseball poet. I get a hit about a third of the time, then I am doing well. If I hit it out of the park eve...