All Comments on 'Route 35'

by DeepAsleep

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champagne1982champagne1982over 16 years ago
a trip

You tie your subject and your metaphor so tightly together that I just wanna come along for the ride. Gorgeous emotions here.

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This has such a softly romantic feel of the wise perspective of an older couple, looking at what's truly important.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 16 years ago
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I don't give a rat's ass what you think of me, Punk (you can thank your buddy for that)

This is good. No further comment on the poem.

P.S. 'ave a bit of christmas cheer courtesy of your travlin' partner

swallowedscreamswallowedscreamover 16 years ago
Beautiful..

What so many women have needed to hear.Lovely, soft but powerful enough to make someone turn on the light and be proud to be read.

foehn2foehn2over 16 years ago
Nice map.

I may be wrong, but I feel I have finally understood the significance of the numeral "35" in the title... Magical word choice and diction. You are among the best contemporary poets in America, in my slightly-less-than-humble opinion.

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