All Comments on 'Safety in Stillness'

there is safety

in stillness, a peace

painful yet predictable

the knowing of nothingness- great lines. Although, they all were good. Definitely great title for this piece. You drew the reader in wonderfully- greatly detailed and understood. Thanks for sharing.

slowly, life bleeds out

as pressure builds

squeezes all hope

beads of sweat dripping~

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So many good lines here in this poem. Christina picked my fav. Yet here are more that must be re-read..Such feeling here.

Heartfelt poem.

dang I have a hard enough time writing about a lady in the country and you wrap up 'stillness' like no body I ever saw!

stillness, what a topic...deep~ very moving for a nonmoving subject matter~ <grin>

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As one could expect in a poem of this length! Words escape me...