All Comments on 'Saint and Sinner'

MMmmmmmm very well done! :)

much poetry here--emotion, yes: but emotion does not make poetry.

I agree. It's a gut blurt. Strong emotions of this nature do not make good poetry for beginners when they come from a personal place. Being so close it is hard to be objective. This sort of thing needs careful, concrete handling, not the mostly abstract stuff here. How old are you? This sort of sounds like teenage angst.