All Comments on 'Satin Sheets'

Love the contrasts: hot sweaty day, cool mountain stream; hot frenzied lust, cool satin sheets.

What an invitation!!!

Hot and sultry! Mentioned in the Sunday reviews

du lac

turning up the termometer, from now on I will turn the thermometer up before I read your poems <bigrin>

from my smutty muddy buddy, lol!

Your erotica sizzles my friend,

you have a great mix here and use

your chosen words well.

Love it hun!

~ Jenn

Hit the spot...with the weather and lust.

love your "schmoozing".....can't get enough.

Love your poems...you always get me going with your words!!!

~Honey

Lghtening strokes? lightning strikes, and cascades of wine as the satin sheets entwine. i generally stray away from convention when I write (at least, my perceptions of convention). still, i really liked the word and image play, here.

nice word painting, one is placed right into the scene rather vividly. Effective!

Mmmmm, doing things to this poor fella. LOL

very very nice, short,sweet. but not sleazy. very erotic. great job