Save Me, Even Though I'm Fine.

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Lust or love, it's all us, but what needs to be dominant?
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Preface - There are two ways of seeing through this. Let me know, who agrees to what?

1] When the lady is in love with a person who sees her as an object of lust, but she craves for his love. Would she be able to bring in his love out of him?

OR / &

2] A talk with our inner self. One a pleasure seeker, the other, the lovesick. When our deep lust takes over the love within us, hiding our true, pure emotions, showing only the kinky, needy side of ours.

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Save me, though I'm fine.

Can we change the world, your world?
Inside your mind, inside your lonely heart.
The whirlpool of your sinful thoughts.
The way you conquer every damsel in need.
The way you respond to anyone lustful.
Your craving leading to your demeaning side.

Can we bring some peace into you?
Even if I had to shed myself piece by piece,
Can we bring some love into you,
That you hide deep inside you, away from us.
To reveal your true nature unknown to us.
To make you the sweetest, that you are.

Can we enjoy those sweet little moments?
That you have left behind, far away from your present.
Be ready to open up the layers you are covered with.
Not to shed the clothes in a jiffy,
But to shed some tears, which means a lot to you.
To bring in a true smile, curving up, your sensuous lips.

Can we try to make your thinking better?
To bring in the joy you have long forgotten.
To make you whole again,
To the true nature of yours
To the child inside you, who is lost
To bring out your vulnerability.

Can we involve your emotions again?
The jubilance you once had.
Open up those hidden faces,
Away from the demonic mask you wear.
Make me see your one true self.
If I deserve to see it, I would cherish it.

Can we make love rather than sex?
Make me worthy of that core affection,
Buried deep inside you without any clue.
Not the lustful eyes or the sweet words
Which would sway in any needy femme.
Be the one you truly are.

Can we bring out the lover inside you?
Not the one, whom you portray.
The one, I promise to stand by.
To embrace your carnalities.
Even if you shred my respect into shreds
Even when I am hurt protecting you.

Can I take you to yourself?
Because it's not just you,
It's me, in you, in disguise.
I need to be saved, in saving you.
Save me, even though I'm fine.
Because you need a savior like me.


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