Sinner.

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Unrequited love, with lust and longing. Self realization.
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I saw you hiding.
hiding your craving.
within the tent of your zipper.
ā—‹
I saw you rushing.
to your private space.
stripping your pants quicker.
ā—‹
I saw you freeing.
the beast inside your boxers.
like an underground stripper.
ā—‹
I saw you gripping.
your shaft in hurry
which looked much thicker.
ā—‹
I saw you tightening.
I wonder how would it taste.
but I remembered, how you did her.
ā—‹
I saw you forgetting.
discarding me like scrap.
disowning me like left over.
ā—‹
I saw you stroking.
desperately to ease your ache.
giving me pain this bitter.
ā—‹
I saw you jerking.
moaning in pleasure.
As if you were with her.
ā—‹
I saw you fastening.
up and down, up and down.
As if you needed her closer.
ā—‹
I saw you hardening.
with every stroke.
Like you were inside her deeper.
ā—‹
I saw you aching.
with your veins popping out.
the tip red, shaft slickier.
ā—‹
I saw you nearing.
your balls in pain.
Like you were within her.
ā—‹
I saw you bursting.
thick stream of seeds.
all over your long pillar.
ā—‹
I saw you oozing.
strings of white cream.
full of life and vigor.
ā—‹
I saw you panting.
taking her name
Like she was nearer.
ā—‹
I saw you relaxing.
with her in your mind.
but wished I could be her.
ā—‹
I saw you smiling.
cleaning your mess.
wishing she would be here.
ā—‹
I saw you loving.
again with lust.
Like she was cheaper.
ā—‹
I saw you lusting.
again with another name.
realizing she is not the winner.
ā—‹
I saw you cleaning.
only the outer clutter.
knowing, you are a sinner.
ā—‹
I saw you sinning.
being unholy and immoral
proving me again,
You are a Sinner.
You are a Sinner.
ā—
Non Existent.

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billrokrabillrokra4 months ago

Very sexy and I like the construction, the repetition. Love it!

I_AM_ONE_OF_YOUI_AM_ONE_OF_YOU4 months agoAuthor

@mindgamer

Thanks for reading this. šŸ™‚

Hope you enjoyed and yes she was in live, he wanted only sex. Hence this poetry.

I_AM_ONE_OF_YOUI_AM_ONE_OF_YOU4 months agoAuthor

@Paul4play.

Yes she was looking at her man secretly cravi g for him.

Feeling neglected and cheated, she was jealous.

She was his previous muse, he has moved on to a new one.

She was in love for him it was oy sex.

So she is craving for him, when he is playing with the other. hence the term sinner.

mindgamer20mindgamer205 months ago

The ache is palpable. The act-relatable.

Paul4playPaul4play5 months ago

I love the voyeuristic playfulness mingled with the reflective exhibitionism;

Reading his mind while telling us what you think he is thinking

And what you feel: the jealousy and pain.

Then there is the final judgment.

Sinner.

But. Are we not sinners, too?

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