All Comments on 'Scraps'

by DawnJ

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demure101demure101about 10 years ago
Wonderful

And painfully true

Oldbear63Oldbear63about 10 years ago
Very nice, very sad

Not always true if you are open, observant and willing. Just sayin'...

tazz317tazz317about 10 years ago
FALSE BELIEFS LEAD TO

non-sequitur emotions. TK U MLJ LV NV people are only as young...as old as they want to be and not what they are. RESPECTFULLY mlj

CleardaynowCleardaynowabout 10 years ago
Really good

A real contrast in style (though not quality) with Toccata.

I particularly like the last four lines (OK I know there are only seven). But the first three are essential as the base.

Every single word counts to build such a strong image.

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