All Comments on 'Seascape'

by seannelson

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foehnfoehnabout 19 years ago
what a romp!

Lovely prose-poem... gave my sluggish mind some tugs, and made me smile. Nice ironies, good language.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
mention

your poem was mentioned on the thread

'NEW POEMS REVIEWS'

Thanks for the Journey~

ReltneReltneabout 19 years ago
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Some great thoughts and phrases here. I only wish you would use another format. A simple paragraph tends to reduce the impact of your insight (IMHO).

annaswirlsannaswirlsabout 19 years ago
did you forget the quotes?

" After noons will be

measured out, measured out, and

measured with coffee spoons, and T.S. Eliot "

Crash Test Dummies

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
one mans trash

is another womans treasure, but this is jumbled, junkie, runstogethernearlyunreadable. Clean it up, give it a shape try again

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