by seannelson
Lovely prose-poem... gave my sluggish mind some tugs, and made me smile. Nice ironies, good language.
your poem was mentioned on the thread
'NEW POEMS REVIEWS'
Thanks for the Journey~
Some great thoughts and phrases here. I only wish you would use another format. A simple paragraph tends to reduce the impact of your insight (IMHO).
" After noons will be
measured out, measured out, and
measured with coffee spoons, and T.S. Eliot "
Crash Test Dummies
is another womans treasure, but this is jumbled, junkie, runstogethernearlyunreadable. Clean it up, give it a shape try again