All Comments on 'Seatbelt Violation'

by EllenMore

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darkmaasdarkmaasover 5 years ago
Sorry I missed this two years ago ...

... but ...

The poem sits uneasily on a knife edge - nothing explicit but a whole world of emotional danger. Well done!

Pleased to meet you.

todski28todski28almost 7 years ago
powerful

the sense of self lost in the command

the non erotic tag takes this to dark places for my mind

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"The heyday of woman's life is the shady side of fifty." Elizabeth Cady Stanton