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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
SECRET WORDS AND VOWS

told by breath and caresses, TK U MLJ LV NV

TzaraTzaraalmost 12 years ago
Rather nice

though the symmetry of the two main verses doesn't seem quite right to me, perhaps overdone a bit. Overall, though, nice poem.

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