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RiverMayaRiverMayaover 3 years ago
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Gorgeous narrative in rhyme. More, please.

OneAuthorOneAuthorover 3 years ago
Fantastic

I smiled while reading every line, and loved the way you ended it.

29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowover 3 years ago

Great flow and finest storytelling. Perfectly erotic in a way that leaves a blank line at the end to be filled by the reader.

My applause.

Thanks for sharing

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