All Comments on 'Sentenced'

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tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
poem

mentioned in today's reviews.

tungtied2utungtied2ualmost 20 years ago
Really liked this

Only thing I'm not sure of is the climbing over the ones you love- doesn't matter that much. Loved the flow and feeling.Thanks.

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
inner city?

This was very good. The first time through I read it as prison, until I got to the line about crawling over those you love. Escape from the hell of the ghetto? Either way, a fascinating read with a gritty feel. I like it a lot.

DustystarDustystaralmost 20 years ago
Free bird

"We were born convicted" about sums it up. Love that line, but enjoyed it all. Try not to feel so much, Toward, it just gets you into trouble <winks>.

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
good piece of writing

very engrossing.

Maria2394Maria2394almost 20 years ago
deep

this is sooo very deep, and so true, well written and much enjoyed :)

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