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by pans_plaything

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Du LacDu Lacabout 19 years ago
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I liked the essence and strength of the feeling behind this work. May I suggest though that you break it into stanzas.. it somehow fizzles because it runs together too much.

Good emotional quality to the desire of non vocal lust..

Du~

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