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by saffire eyez
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f-cynyrover 18 years agovery nice
rhythms in this poem, the cadence was seductive and caries the reader from beginning to end. Nice poem.
Anonymousover 18 years agothe title got me
and they are sexy verbs!!
a suggestion, when you get to the adjectives, you could drop some of the "we're" and it would be even better, just my opinion tho. good work :)
maria
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