All Comments on '"She" is Me'

by Mikkella

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Banginnnn!

I love this poem its really good and makes me want to go grab my girlfriend and bang her real good till she understands how its like to be away from her.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
True infatuation..

with deep yearnings for what he/she hasn't had. (yet) Nice work.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Desires!

Terrible yearnings that never quite get satisfied. He still wants her desperately - though possession is never achieved.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

A rare gift of deep feeling

Expressed in these phrases

While love is experienced unknowingly.

wtdgirl1wtdgirl1almost 18 years ago
Wow

That was amazing.

I wish I could write words like that.

Thank you for letting me read it.

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