All Comments on 'She wants SMUT, part 1'

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champagne1982champagne1982over 15 years ago
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You've got a lot of explicit activity inside this poem even though you ;) beat around the bush with your descriptions. I like your word choices and the playfulness between your two subjects in it. What significance does a "brush" hold in the poem? You kinda blind sided me with that line. If it doesn't carry any symbolism or common meaning inside the poem, does it need to be there? Just a point to consider, I enjoyed reading it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Ohhh, the memories.

What an event that was. Your writing certainly brought it all back to me. *kiss*

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