by verecurious
You've got a lot of explicit activity inside this poem even though you ;) beat around the bush with your descriptions. I like your word choices and the playfulness between your two subjects in it. What significance does a "brush" hold in the poem? You kinda blind sided me with that line. If it doesn't carry any symbolism or common meaning inside the poem, does it need to be there? Just a point to consider, I enjoyed reading it.
What an event that was. Your writing certainly brought it all back to me. *kiss*