All Comments on 'She Who Shapes the Sacred Land'

I truely enjoy your mystical poetry (~_~) and the added note tells the tale that unfolded feelings and formed from your passionate pen. Nice!

http://forum.literotica.com:81/showthread.php?p=22330268#post22330268

By the way, I don't usually give 5s. I always feel like there's room for improvement. With your piece, I don't. Don't change a word (or punctuation for that matter).

Breathtaking! thank you.

~Syn

Enjoyed reading this on the forum and shame on me for not pointing out then, conceived and fiery spelling issue. Thanks for the end-note explanation you offer; saved me from a trip to Google!

Powerful poem about an awful disease. No matter how much she cuts, she can't slice awaay the past.