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by Noira

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Esperanza_HidalgoEsperanza_Hidalgoover 13 years ago
I liked the

other best, but enjoy seeing you writing poetry. You have a voice I understand, my sister.

tigerjentigerjenover 13 years ago

I actually squirmed in my seat when reading this..... ;)

KobaKobaover 13 years ago

Another one well done! You have a knack for bringing out imagery that brings an inner thrill to the reader. I like it. Good rhyming too!

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