All Comments on 'Shit on my shoe'

Perfect, I think we all have a wanker or two like this one in our lives. Stinky shit stuck in our shoes hahahaha love it

I don't think that she is happy with him..haha

I think somewhere between stanza eight and nine she shows some interest in that guy? Of course she does.. Who could she yell at so poetically if he is really gone? *****

And what’s with her calling him “cunt”? Oh, I guess that should be passing as part of the “authentic” style. Don’t get me wrong, I am for authentic - twenty four seven, but does it have to mean showing disrespect to women by women? ***** Other than that It was actually fun to read.