All Comments on 'Should I'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
I fail...

to see what the visual form of this poem is supposed to represent. It doesn't appear to be penis shaped, or a penis sticking out of something (like jeans). Maybe it's just too early in the morning!! Be careful of editing..."cirling" for "circling" and "tonuge" for "tongue" twice.

Tom CollinsTom Collinsover 18 years ago
Whew

So far this one is my favorite. It's just this side of orgasmic without needing help. ;)

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