by Liar
You catch the reader with the opening stanza:
An empty mailbox grinned soulless.
Bill tongue lolling out, but empty
of titbits, trinkets, elaborate labours
of whatever would tickle the fancy.
Twisting the desire to have a happy ending, you lace the emotional qualities of panic filled need within this write. Strong powerful write.
Du Lac~
Mentioned in the Sunday Reviews
You use fancy words about sexy things. Do you always think like so??? I do like what of it makes sense for me.