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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
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You catch the reader with the opening stanza:

An empty mailbox grinned soulless.

Bill tongue lolling out, but empty

of titbits, trinkets, elaborate labours

of whatever would tickle the fancy.

Twisting the desire to have a happy ending, you lace the emotional qualities of panic filled need within this write. Strong powerful write.

Du Lac~

Mentioned in the Sunday Reviews

Scott N. LeavittScott N. Leavittabout 19 years ago
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You use fancy words about sexy things. Do you always think like so??? I do like what of it makes sense for me.

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