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by Senna Jawa

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Maria2394Maria2394over 20 years ago
walking is a good thing

and so is finally realizing that we are trapped in our own obsessions with money and things. THis poem made me remember where my heart is, Thank you Senna :)

IcingsugarIcingsugarover 20 years ago
A two part insight

Into days and lives that fly by way too fast. The first half, direct and unsentimental, but still warm, the second half more dreamy and caught in the moment. I think this should had benefited from being two separate poems.

annaswirlsannaswirlsover 20 years ago
My favorite

....of all of your poems I have read. Beautiful. I think I will go get more coffee.....

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