All Comments on 'Sinner.'

Wow! I feel the intensity and the pain!

@BillyTheGray... thanks for reading this Honey.

I love the voyeuristic playfulness mingled with the reflective exhibitionism;

Reading his mind while telling us what you think he is thinking

And what you feel: the jealousy and pain.

Then there is the final judgment.

Sinner.

But. Are we not sinners, too?

The ache is palpable. The act-relatable.

@Paul4play.

Yes she was looking at her man secretly cravi g for him.

Feeling neglected and cheated, she was jealous.

She was his previous muse, he has moved on to a new one.

She was in love for him it was oy sex.

So she is craving for him, when he is playing with the other. hence the term sinner.

@mindgamer

Thanks for reading this. 🙂

Hope you enjoyed and yes she was in live, he wanted only sex. Hence this poetry.

Very sexy and I like the construction, the repetition. Love it!