All Comments on 'Slow Sweet Love~'

If only I could share that sweet love of yours, LilDarlin. How happy would I be! You make me wish to read even more of this poem - to share it more and more.

love the way this style free falls into your imagination~

Great images, LilDarlin! Made me want to go play. Wash dishes with my honey and throw bubbles in his face *smiles*

Dirt?...well, I just want to roll around with him in it but it's getting cold out. I'm sure we can roll around in something else. You had me thinking of so many things. Enjoyable read. Great work drawing the reader in.

your poem gives me the mental image of a CMT video years ago for Deanna Carter, the way she spun in the swing with the cotton sundress on.. simple, innocent yet incredibly sexy at the same time. Great job lil darlin you've got a winner!

sweet lightness of being;

the innocence of eros

in the everyday

play of

being..........