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by TarnishedPenny

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ElectricBlueElectricBlueover 2 years ago

Ouch. Brutally honest, horrendously real. Cudos, TP.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I am a Vietnam veteran. Your story was very nice, until the mention of the black official car and knock on the door.

TarnishedPennyTarnishedPennyover 2 years agoAuthor

Anon - I too am a vet and he was one of the best men I knew. I won't say more. God bless.

RRC2RRC2over 2 years ago

Beautiful

Thought provoking

Tear jerking

THANK YOU

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Heartbreaking. What a powerful narrative poem.

SexualisPhantasiaSexualisPhantasiaabout 1 year ago

Amazing and powerful. An intimate look into the life of two people. I like the vivid description of the memories they made along the way.

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Deeply, utterly in love - after all these years.