All Comments on 'Sneltrein'

makes me prone to puns, like "cutting the cheese". As a little "slice" of life, I like it, structure, word play, etc.

MNS

this poem was mentioned in the thread, "New Poems Reviews"

thanks for the literary journey (~_~)

Thank you.

You've captured a moment in time. Your imagery is deft, esp

'a cleft-chinned

porcelain doll.'

which was my favourite here. It makes me want to go to Holland.

An excellent piece of pure poetry.