All Comments on 'Snow Angel'

Nice and sweet {oh oh, you know it's bad when he starts it with nice...} but {not the dreaded 'but'!} there's a small little typo that's bugging me:

"trees ice cycle branches"

assuming you refer to more than one tree, I suggest:

"trees' icicle branches"

Quick! Do a frantic EDIT and make the fix and no one'll know!

I enjoyed reading this a lot, RF. Quite a charming and poignant poem with lush wintry imagery.

xx

display of winters beauty

Simple rendering ~ yet beautiful with such an elegant grace.

great visuals and sentiment. the structure lifted it to another level.

very nice poem

I find this poem quite erotic. Nicely done RF.

Tess

I like snow angels (~_*) and I enjoyed your passionate poetry!