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vrosej10vrosej10over 13 years ago
The first stanza is a knockout.

Whilst this is a good poem, I think it could be a great poem with more attention to the language. Poetry is music made with words. It should sound delicious. It took me ages to get the but once I did, my work improved A LOT.

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