All Comments on 'so i am not a real man'

This does not taste like Porter, more like a bud's lite, reduced in taste and content.

is still pretty good--so it ain't all bleak. :D Still, this poem feels like an angryish response--it's point is well takem, but I think the sentiment would have worked better if you used humor or, alternatively, were more metaphorical. :rose: A.

like a book and cover, TK U MLJ LV NV