All Comments on 'Sogobia's Dream'

I really like this Du ~

I had to read it twice coz

there are just so many wonderful

thoughts in here

Gold rings and stars on fingers

material examples of vows easily tossed

shadows of feelings short of the miracle

Devoiring oaths false in the spirit

Lessons abandoned when fear clings to self

I really enjoyed reading this

Thanks,

~ Jenn

practicality denies sensuality,

maturity, youthful innocence;

the choices are simple -

death wins in the denial, or

life eternal in celebratory merging

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An excellent offering du~

your poem has been mentioned in the thread

"New Poems Reviews"

thanks for the journey~

of your journey in this one...you learn much on your path...lol/blue

'True pledging of love lacks the rules'

ty,bd