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KOLKOREKOLKOREover 16 years ago
Deep and edgy

Look what you have done! Instead of going to sleep in more or less normal time I'd have to process your poem. Ok I admit self inflicted wounds, but I could hardly expect such a slew of top notch poems running on me at the end of one Monday.

Well, First shot. Is it posturing or is it real risqué life vs. the tame and the mundane. Maybe it's fantasizing about leaving one's safe zone and leaving on the edge -being ready to pay the price. But it also goes to more subtle distinctions. The pretend rebellions which give the illusion of doing things and going places. Just a bit of discomfort, nothing else. SMART AND COMPLEX POEM NEEDS TO BE MENTIONED. BTW, what happened today?

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