All Comments on 'song of slolam'

with each goodbye we learn to flower our own garden...you portrayed it well...

you are mentioned in today's reviews...hugZenharmony/blue

Another well written piece. I enjoyed this.

Julia

you may want to consider making some lines longer due to the sprawl of the piece. it's just an opinion. i like this the best:

A line

Fine comb teeth words

So Raven and Hyena

Get the lasts word in

Nevermore

Har de har

Shoulda seen that one coming

For miles and miles and miles

that stanza has a nice setup and i can read it as if doing it aloud.