All Comments on 'Sonia's Poem'

Sickness and therapy all-in-one, oh, that freely given present that costs you so much.

Well written as the lines flow freely and rhymes don't feel forced.

Thanks for sharing

29wordsforsnow . Thank you for my first ever comment on Lit !

Nice! Very relatable. Why don't poems rhyme anymore?

Well its more difficult than if you just spew and count syllables.

My ex came to mind. I still love her but we were no good for each other. When it came time to rip off the bandaid a big chunk of me came off with it.

love your work Mr pounder !