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by Anschul
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WickedEveabout 16 years ago~
Your poem was mentioned on the literotica poetry forum, in the new poems review thread.
LeBrozabout 16 years ago██
Very good on all points. The rhyming is seamless and unobtrusive, it doesn't overwhelm to the point of being obvious. A tasteful bit of humor slides in so effortlessly.
KOLKOREabout 16 years agoBetween a man and his wife
I watch and cneer as your poetic prowess grows in leaps it seems.
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