All Comments on 'Sonnet on a Woman's Breast'

Lovely!

Well, I’m 65, and this old man can say it’s nit just a memory

Not usually a poetry fan. Glad I read this one. Well done. 5*

Absolutely beautiful.

Good, but not long enough. Surely you can add to what you have written. Tell a story, elaborate on someone’s breasts, etc.

An unexpected arrow to the heart. Thank you.

Beautiful allusion and lovely sentiment, Randi. The final couplet gave me pause for a moment until I realized I wasn't reading in iambic pentameter. Oops!

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A kiss blown its way and 5 pretty stars cast in its honor.

Thanks for sharing. Well written poetry is so often erotic whether deliberate or not and always thought/feel provoking. The last line is especially so.

Lovely poem, but I’d say what has more beauty than the eyes, yes breasts are lovely, but a lovely set of eyes, they are both gems, with beauty that rivals earths greatest gemstone and pools that show the sweetest soul or the darkest predator….. asses are pretty great too (sorry to shift the mood but am I wrong)

NewOldGuy77 stole my comment! Lovely poem

I appreciate the kind comments. @Dusu68: Sorry, dude, but a sonnet is, by definition, limited to 14 lines. More, and it isn't a sonnet.

Dusu68 you seem unclear what a sonnet is. You can Bing or Google it. But here's a clue. It's NOT a story. You are reading something in the poetry section.

It's as if you were critical of someone for not having enough lines in a limerick.

Wonderfully evocative

5 stars

Cagivagurl

I know how hard it is to write that form. Five pointy things.

Beautiful ode to a woman's breast.

The only thing to make this a perfect 10 would be a picture to show us the beauty to help us worship what is described!!!!!

Beauty and a woman’s breast certainly go together. Lovely poem!

Yes, beautiful. I love a woman’s breast, the touch, the feel. No words to describe.

Beautiful! Lines 5 and 6 of the second stanza are the most evocative for me. 5*

Lovely ode to a woman's breasts. In my life I have seen and felt several lovely breasts. Each was different, yet equally pleasurable. And in spite of all those tits, I never fail to be captivated by a new good-looking pair. A woman's body is a veritable Garden of Eden with jucy fruits everywhere you look. It is said that Paradise lies between a woman's thighs. And not far from that Paradise, on a straight line, are the twin soft mountains of Aphrodite topped by juicy mouth-watering cherries, the dream of every hot-blooded man. May every woman always grow D cup boobs, and may they never sag.

A nice ode to one of the pinnacles of feminine beauty. Though I'm basically an ass-man, I absolutely adore a full, round female ass, whether heart-shaped, pear-shaped or bubble, I also just look lovely full non-sagging boobs with pink pert nipples. The poem is good, says it all.