All Comments on 'Sonnet Three'

The visions this poem conjures are so fun and hot!! Delicious......................

You have captured that solemn moment and brought to an unexpected fun conclusion!

Well done!

Somehow the wetness running down to your knee adds an element of the sacramental to that sacred rite. The raw hungry heat and flood of blessed passion, the wet of anticipated rapture and release. Lovely job with the sonnet.