All Comments on 'SP Essence #3'

I realize its a personal choive, FP, but I like these poems and kinda wanted to give you a high 5 ;)

mentioned in today's reviews. No voting here. My vote is a 5.

words easily borrowed, spit

and drool included on the bill

and wooden beak

tax free, duty free

never arranged as prescribed

sweet pea blossom crushed under her

stone heavy boot called art

not mine to judge, diamond sharpened graphite

or mothballed in cherry box without hinge

these pretty pretty stars

hide eyes behind Orion's belt

between clench and grow

blind

borrowed, thusly, I thank thee

and thee, and thou

oh, how does one forget

to thank the lender

and stretch on towards

that n'eer ending

now

** pax vobiscum**

"Like seaweed lays before dying

all a line and drying

before grinding

into universal dust "

intense image, painful but true