All Comments on 'Spring'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
as I

get older I start to view spring this way too.

Wonderfully light but true representation of what awaits each spring Morn and Eve

Thank you

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Amusing.

Blends in the anticipation of spring with the more unwelcome aspects of it. All great points.

WickedEveWickedEveabout 19 years ago
Some lines are better

"The persistent demands of the cat no longer pierce the cold night air"

"The scent of just born grass wafts through the open window"

The two above lines are just wonderful. I'd love to see the rest of the poem on this level.

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