All Comments on 'Spring Fever'

Clever idea.

....of delight. Nicely done.

Tess

Honestly, you crack me up. I'm sitting here laughing, maybe because the images in my head are in turmoil... a contrast of the pretty, delicate and dainty flowers/very naughty things you are wanting to do with them. Good job, Ben.

Beautifully sensuous!! Very well done!

because it's clever and funny--like Tristesse said, a garden of delight. Now write some more. :-)

I really enjoyed the sensuality combined with the humour of the play on words. Of course, I'm particularly partial to flowery language.

I liked the imagery and creativity. I agree with Kimba, I have multiple images in my head now. Keep up the good work.

when i started here , people gave me some good feedback-i can tell you are not expeienced, but keep trying

Great use of words - a quick, fun bit of prose that makes us THINK. Refreshing step away from the vernacular. MORE!!!

...skipping through the tulips with Ben was delightfully fun.

My jaw ached from smiling so much!, I love this...